Yo guys, I’m working to recreate the original no profile pic from reddit (the one on the left) but without any color shades for now, and I came up with this pic (the one on the right), is it any good for you guys?

(I’m not a designer or in the industry at all) So I’m not that used to this kind of softwares, tell me how I could improve it and I will try my best to do so.

When I get a design that it’s good and liked by everybody, or at least most of us, I will shade it using the original colors or somethings that we like better and release it to use for free on Infinity